Having a source (TedTalk by Sherry Turkle) already, summarizing and analyzing it was a great start. For the introduction I had an idea or a structure of how to write it. Same with my conclusion. Body paragraphs I had no clue. All I knew was to go in detail about each subtopic rather than being general about mental, physical, psychological, and so on.
To be honest, I had time to work on it but outside factors made me not have a chance to fully invest my time working on the essay. The last day of Thanksgiving break, I finally had the time to just focus on school– especially my essay. So I had to have an idea for what each body paragraph will be talking about and how it ties back to the thesis. I used NCC’s database and google scholar to find my articles. Finding the articles was difficult as my topic was specific and needed facts and data.
As of now (11/30/23), I got the rough draft done and just need to revise a few things. Those few stuff are making sure the quotes are in MLA format (the titles of articles are in quotation marks, and some words should be upper cased), don’t say ‘states’ ‘says’ after what the author’s last name– instead say more of what the author’s feeling and for transitions use words that could make the paragraph flow together Block quote is something new I learned yesterday when I visited my professor during her office hours (will definitely use Purdue Owl to make sure my writing is what my professors and future writing would like). Block quote is when there are four or more lines of quotes it should have indents, no quotation marks and a period right after the quote ends. This makes the quote more appealing, easier to read, and easier to identify when the quote begins and ends. I'll give this my all before school ends!



